So here is a little peak at what I have just written :-
It
seemed to take a long time before they got to the edge of the trees and with
every step his heart thudded harder in his chest, obscenely loud in the quiet
night.
They
entered the dense undergrowth which grew below the soaring trees, full of
trepidation and without a real plan, bunching close together, wary of ambush.
The
forest seemed unnaturally quiet. No owls hooted or birds cooed. The only sounds
were the brittle cracks of unseen twigs which littered the forest floor.
The
almost preternatural silence was deafening. A solid wall of muteness seemed to surround
them, so that the only noises were the ones they made themselves.
Taylor
wished with all his heart that he had somehow made Matilda stay behind, that he
had managed to convince her that the risk of their people losing her was too
great… But to Matilda’s ears they would merely have been words and words could
be no substitute for action.
These characters are heading for trouble and Matilda is destined to be in the thick of it. Why won't that woman ever listen? Now who is it she reminds me of...
Happy Reading!
Carmen.
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