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Tuesday 16 September 2014

The Boy Who Rescues Pigeons.

Sometimes I wonder what you glean from all these little bits of storyline I post. Do you try to piece the story together? Does it whet your appetite for more? Does it give you an indication of how the characters are progressing? Feel free to write in and share your thoughts.

Here is the bit I have just written ten minutes ago:-

 
Lucas thought for a moment. The scene all around him was so beautiful, the few boats on the water quaintly painted with flowers and names embellished in flowing script. Here and there a few ducks swam serenely on top of the water, or dived momentarily beneath the still, glassy surface, their movements causing little ripples all around; ripples which grew wider and wider before fading to nothing once more.

Across from the towpath were fields of the lushest green grass where cows grazed sedately and gazed at him as if he were the oddest looking thing they had ever seen. Set against a blue sky which held only a hint of the darkness which would later descend, it was a surreal scene and he felt as if he were not witnessing it for real, through his own eyes but instead through the medium of oil on canvas.

It was somehow too perfect to be real.
 
 
Poor, poor Lucas is trapped in a situation that is not of his making. I hope he finds his way out!
 
Happy Reading x

2 comments:

  1. Hi

    Any idea when we can expect the culmination and the release of this book? Just a few extracts have me keen to read more!

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  2. Thank you for your interest. My next book to come out is Ascension, [Jan 2107]. I hope to have The Boy Who Rescues Pigeons out soon.

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