Sometimes I wonder what you glean from all these little bits of storyline I post. Do you try to piece the story together? Does it whet your appetite for more? Does it give you an indication of how the characters are progressing? Feel free to write in and share your thoughts.
Here is the bit I have just written ten minutes ago:-
Lucas
thought for a moment. The scene all around him was so beautiful, the few boats on
the water quaintly painted with flowers and names embellished in flowing
script. Here and there a few ducks swam serenely on top of the water, or dived
momentarily beneath the still, glassy surface, their movements causing little
ripples all around; ripples which grew wider and wider before fading to nothing
once more.
Across
from the towpath were fields of the lushest green grass where cows grazed sedately
and gazed at him as if he were the oddest looking thing they had ever seen. Set
against a blue sky which held only a hint of the darkness which would later
descend, it was a surreal scene and he felt as if he were not witnessing it for
real, through his own eyes but instead through the medium of oil on canvas.
It
was somehow too perfect to be real.
Poor, poor Lucas is trapped in a situation that is not of his making. I hope he finds his way out!
Happy Reading x